diff --git a/doc/source/drivers/ilo.rst b/doc/source/drivers/ilo.rst index fb50dc2293..f73b6f0d6f 100644 --- a/doc/source/drivers/ilo.rst +++ b/doc/source/drivers/ilo.rst @@ -22,8 +22,8 @@ Currently there are 3 iLO drivers: The ``iscsi_ilo`` and ``agent_ilo`` drivers provide security enhanced PXE-less deployment by using iLO virtual media to boot up the bare metal node. -These drivers send management info through management channel and separates -it from data channel which is used for deployment. +These drivers send management info through the management channel and separate +it from the data channel which is used for deployment. ``iscsi_ilo`` and ``agent_ilo`` drivers use deployment ramdisk built from ``diskimage-builder``. The ``iscsi_ilo`` driver deploys from @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Prerequisites ============= * `proliantutils `_ is a python package - which contains set of modules for managing HPE ProLiant hardware. + which contains a set of modules for managing HPE ProLiant hardware. Install ``proliantutils`` module on the ironic conductor node. Minimum version required is 2.2.0:: @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ Web server configuration on conductor ``use_web_server_for_images``: If the variable is set to ``false``, ``iscsi_ilo`` and ``agent_ilo`` uses swift containers to host the intermediate floppy image and the boot ISO. If the variable is set to ``true``, these drivers -uses the local web server for hosting the intermediate files. The default value +use the local web server for hosting the intermediate files. The default value for ``use_web_server_for_images`` is False. ``http_url``: The value for this variable is prefixed with the generated @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ PXE or iPXE. Target Users ~~~~~~~~~~~~ -* Users who do not want to use PXE/TFTP protocol on their data centres. +* Users who do not want to use PXE/TFTP protocol in their data centers. * Users who have concerns with PXE protocol's security issues and want to have a security enhanced PXE-less deployment mechanism. diff --git a/doc/source/drivers/ipa.rst b/doc/source/drivers/ipa.rst index ce01f48819..9d4a6e0269 100644 --- a/doc/source/drivers/ipa.rst +++ b/doc/source/drivers/ipa.rst @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Steps to enable proxies download. You can think of it as roughly the time needed for IPA ramdisk to startup and begin download. This value is used to check if the swift temporary URL duration is large enough to let the image download begin. Also - if temporary URL caching is enabled this will determine if a cached entry + if temporary URL caching is enabled, this will determine if a cached entry will still be valid when the download starts. It is used only if ``[glance]swift_temp_url_cache_enabled`` is ``True``. @@ -108,10 +108,10 @@ Steps to enable proxies Advanced configuration ====================== -Out-of-band Vs. in-band power off on deploy +Out-of-band vs. in-band power off on deploy ------------------------------------------- -After deploying an image onto the node's hard disk Ironic will reboot +After deploying an image onto the node's hard disk, Ironic will reboot the machine into the new image. By default this power action happens ``in-band``, meaning that the ironic-conductor will instruct the IPA ramdisk to power itself off. @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ ramdisk to power itself off. Some hardware may have a problem with the default approach and would require Ironic to talk directly to the management controller to switch the power off and on again. In order to tell Ironic to do -that you have to update the node's ``driver_info`` field and set the +that, you have to update the node's ``driver_info`` field and set the ``deploy_forces_oob_reboot`` parameter with the value of **True**. For example, the below command sets this configuration in a specific node:: diff --git a/doc/source/drivers/oneview.rst b/doc/source/drivers/oneview.rst index 7874d2948e..0bd8e023a1 100644 --- a/doc/source/drivers/oneview.rst +++ b/doc/source/drivers/oneview.rst @@ -347,9 +347,9 @@ result, there are different steps to perform if the node has an instance provisioned, in other words, when the `provisioning_state` is set to `active`. .. note:: - Verify if the node has not already been migrated checking if there is - a `dynamic_allocation` field set to ``True`` in the `driver_info` namespace - doing:: + Verify if the node has not already been migrated by checking if there is + a `dynamic_allocation` field set to ``True`` in the `driver_info` + namespace by doing:: $ ironic node-show --fields driver_info @@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ ironic-oneviewd ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ The ``ironic-oneviewd`` daemon monitors the ironic inventory of resources and -providing facilities to operators managing OneView driver deployments. The +provides facilities to operators managing OneView driver deployments. The daemon supports both allocation models (dynamic and pre-allocation) as of version 0.1.0.