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</listitem> </listitem>
<listitem> <listitem>
<para>Bridged/NAT -- DHCP -- These Scripts should be run <para>Bridged/NAT -- DHCP -- These Scripts should be run
without internet connection after Pre-Install.sh. If your without internet connection after Pre-Install.sh.
networking configuration is not exact a few command will The Templates/* should be changed to the required IP
not work. you need to change the Templates/* to the Addresses for custom networks.</para>
required IP Addresses for custom networks.</para>
</listitem> </listitem>
</itemizedlist> </itemizedlist>
</step> </step>
<step> <step>
<title>Test scripts individually</title> <title>Test scripts individually</title>
<para>Run the shell scripts in the <filename>Scripts</filename> <para>Run the shell scripts in the <filename>Scripts</filename>
folder to verify that they run correctly. You do not need to folder to verify they run correctly. Do not install Virtual Box,
install Virtual Box, although it is recommended because your although it is recommended because your host machine might fail.</para>
host machine might fail.</para> <para>To test the scripts, run them. Some scripts require
<para>To test scripts, simply run them. Some scripts require
input parameters. If you do not want to run them manually, run input parameters. If you do not want to run them manually, run
the <filename>Scripts/test_scripts.sh</filename> file. Virtual the <filename>Scripts/test_scripts.sh</filename> file. Virtual
Box guest add-ons are not required to test the scripts as Box guest add-ons are not required to test the scripts as