From 230058af72e49653bf1f371879735365d4eb9e90 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shilla Saebi Date: Tue, 7 Jan 2014 17:35:56 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Cleaned up module001-ch003-core-projects.xml round the world to around the world changed for more overview to for an overview Did some sentence cleanup, removed words changed as to an Corrected run on sentences queryable, changed to query-able Change-Id: Ib2d55a2872cc00542918e12583dfa32d04c6c90f --- .../module001-ch003-core-projects.xml | 34 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml b/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml index 336381dd84..db7fb9a3a8 100644 --- a/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml +++ b/doc/training-guides/module001-ch003-core-projects.xml @@ -201,14 +201,14 @@ starting with its first commit in May, 2010. (I have - deliberatly not + deliberately not - included last commit date since this is an active + included the last commit date since this is an active project with - people working on it from all round the world). + people working on it from all around the world).
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- For more overview on OpenStack refer - http://www.openstack.org or http://goo.gl/4q7nVI, most of the - common questions and queries are covered here so as to address - the massive amount of questions that may arise out of - this. + For an overview of OpenStack refer to + http://www.openstack.org or http://goo.gl/4q7nVI. Common + questions and answers are also covered here. Core Projects Overview - Let’s take a dive into some technical aspects of OpenStack, - its amazing scalability and flexibility are few of its awesome - features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing platform but - the OpenSource Nature of it and the fact that its Community - driven, it is explicitly meant to serve the OpenSource community + Let’s take a dive into some technical aspects of OpenStack. + Its scalability and flexibility are a few of the awesome + features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing platform. The + OpenSource Nature of it and the fact that it is Community + driven are explicitly meant to serve the OpenSource community and its demands. Being a cloud computing platform, OpenStack consists of many - core and incubated projects which as a whole makes it really good + core and incubated projects which makes it really good as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. But the following points are the main components of OpenStack that are - necessary to be present in the cloud to call it as OpenStack + necessary to be present in the cloud to call it an OpenStack Cloud. Components of OpenStack OpenStack has a modular architecture with various code names @@ -423,8 +421,8 @@ Networking(Neutron) Today's datacenter networks contain more devices than ever - before servers, network equipment, storage systems and - security appliances many of which are further divided into + before. From servers, network equipment, storage systems and + security appliances, many of which are further divided into virtual machines and virtual networks. The number of IP addresses, routing configurations and security rules can quickly grow into the millions. Traditional network management @@ -537,7 +535,7 @@ cloud in a single registry. Users and third-party tools can programmatically determine which resources they can access. - Additionally, the catalog provides a queryable list of all + Additionally, the catalog provides a query-able list of all of the services deployed in an OpenStack cloud in a single registry. Users and third-party tools can programmatically determine which resources they can access.