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<listitem>
<para>starting with its first commit in May, 2010. (I have
deliberatly not</para>
deliberately not</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>included last commit date since this is an active
<para>included the last commit date since this is an active
project with</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>people working on it from all round the world).</para>
<para>people working on it from all around the world).</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<figure>
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</imageobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
<para>For more overview on OpenStack refer
http://www.openstack.org or http://goo.gl/4q7nVI, most of the
common questions and queries are covered here so as to address
the massive amount of questions that may arise out of
this.</para>
<para>For an overview of OpenStack refer to
http://www.openstack.org or http://goo.gl/4q7nVI. Common
questions and answers are also covered here.</para>
<para><guilabel>Core Projects Overview</guilabel></para>
<para>Let’s take a dive into some technical aspects of OpenStack,
its amazing scalability and flexibility are few of its awesome
features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing platform but
the OpenSource Nature of it and the fact that its Community
driven, it is explicitly meant to serve the OpenSource community
<para>Let’s take a dive into some technical aspects of OpenStack.
Its scalability and flexibility are a few of the awesome
features that make it a rock-solid cloud computing platform. The
OpenSource Nature of it and the fact that it is Community
driven are explicitly meant to serve the OpenSource community
and its demands.</para>
<para>Being a cloud computing platform, OpenStack consists of many
core and incubated projects which as a whole makes it really good
core and incubated projects which makes it really good
as an IaaS cloud computing platform/Operating System. But the
following points are the main components of OpenStack that are
necessary to be present in the cloud to call it as OpenStack
necessary to be present in the cloud to call it an OpenStack
Cloud.</para>
<para><guimenu>Components of OpenStack</guimenu></para>
<para>OpenStack has a modular architecture with various code names
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</itemizedlist>
<para><guisubmenu>Networking(Neutron)</guisubmenu></para>
<para>Today's datacenter networks contain more devices than ever
before servers, network equipment, storage systems and
security appliances many of which are further divided into
before. From servers, network equipment, storage systems and
security appliances, many of which are further divided into
virtual machines and virtual networks. The number of IP
addresses, routing configurations and security rules can
quickly grow into the millions. Traditional network management
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cloud in a single registry. Users and third-party tools can
programmatically determine which resources they can
access.</para>
<para>Additionally, the catalog provides a queryable list of all
<para>Additionally, the catalog provides a query-able list of all
of the services deployed in an OpenStack cloud in a single
registry. Users and third-party tools can programmatically
determine which resources they can access.</para>