[ops-guide] Cleanup ops lay of land chapter

Change-Id: Ie0691fdb4ba1ae1092c79ea1c32cb9e1d4ef5073
Implements: blueprint ops-guide-rst
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KATO Tomoyuki 2016-05-04 23:27:03 +09:00
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@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ tab with a :guilabel:`System Panel` and an :guilabel:`Identity` tab.
These interfaces give you access to system information and usage as
well as to settings for configuring what
end users can do. Refer to the `OpenStack Administrator
Guide <http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide/dashboard.html>`_ for
Guide <http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide/dashboard.html>`__ for
detailed how-to information about using the dashboard as an admin user.
Command-Line Tools
@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ The generated file looks something like this:
require interactivity. It is possible to store a value directly in
the script if you require a noninteractive operation, but you then
need to be extremely cautious with the security and permissions of
this file.passwordssecurity issues passwords
this file.
EC2 compatibility credentials can be downloaded by selecting
:guilabel:`Project`, then :guilabel:`Compute`, then
@ -205,9 +205,7 @@ Inspecting API Calls
--------------------
The command-line tools can be made to show the OpenStack API calls they
make by passing the :option:`--debug` flag to them.API (application
programming interface) API calls, inspectingcommand-line tools
inspecting API calls For example:
make by passing the :option:`--debug` flag to them. For example:
.. code-block:: console
@ -229,7 +227,7 @@ such as `jq <http://stedolan.github.io/jq/>`_, to parse the JSON from
the responses.
The first thing you must do is authenticate with the cloud using your
credentials to get an authentication token.
credentials to get an :term:`authentication token`.
Your credentials are a combination of username, password, and tenant
(project). You can extract these values from the ``openrc.sh`` discussed
@ -239,7 +237,7 @@ are typically good for 24 hours, and when the token expires, you are
alerted with a 401 (Unauthorized) response and you can request another
token.
#. Look at your OpenStack service catalog:
#. Look at your OpenStack service :term:`catalog`:
.. code-block:: console
@ -484,9 +482,7 @@ project, while the other is unallocated.
Users and Projects
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
To see a list of projects that have been added to the cloud,projects
obtaining list of currentuser management listing usersworking
environment users and projects run:
To see a list of projects that have been added to the cloud, run:
.. code-block:: console
@ -526,8 +522,7 @@ To see a list of users, run:
Running Instances
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
To see a list of running instances,instances list of runningworking
environment running instances run:
To see a list of running instances, run:
.. code-block:: console
@ -597,6 +592,6 @@ Summary
We hope you have enjoyed this quick tour of your working environment,
including how to interact with your cloud and extract useful
information. From here, you can use the `Administrator
information. From here, you can use the `OpenStack Administrator
Guide <http://docs.openstack.org/admin-guide/>`_ as your
reference for all of the command-line functionality in your cloud.