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small edit to section_compute-configure-migrations

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mount to plural - mounts it
changed , to .
added be before migrated
Split into separate sentences for clarity

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shilla-saebi 2014-05-20 22:35:57 -04:00
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doc/admin-guide-cloud/compute/section_compute-configure-migrations.xml
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<listitem>
<para>In this example, <literal>HostA</literal> is the NFSv4
server that exports
<filename><replaceable>NOVA-INST-DIR</replaceable>/instances</filename>,
and <literal>HostB</literal> and <literal>HostC</literal>
mount it.</para>
<filename><replaceable>NOVA-INST-DIR</replaceable>/instances</filename> directory.
<literal>HostB</literal> and <literal>HostC</literal>
are NFSv4 clients that mount it.</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<procedure>
@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ none 16502856 0 16502856 0% /lib/init/rw
HostA: 921515008 101921792 772783104 12% /var/lib/nova/instances ( &lt;--- this line is important.)</computeroutput></screen>
</step>
<step>
<para>Update the libvirt configurations so that the calls can be made securely. These methods enable remote access over TCP and are not documented here, please consult your network administrator for assistance in deciding how to configure access.</para>
<para>Update the libvirt configurations so that the calls can be made securely. These methods enable remote access over TCP and are not documented here. Please consult your network administrator for assistance in deciding how to configure access.</para>
<para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ HostA: 921515008 101921792 772783104 12% /var/lib/nova/instances ( &lt;
<para>The Compute service does not use libvirt's live migration
by default because there is a risk that the migration process
never ends. This can happen if the guest operating system
dirties blocks on the disk faster than they can
dirties blocks on the disk faster than they can be
migrated.</para>
</section>
</section>