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Shilla Saebi 2014-01-30 13:29:22 -05:00
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doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/emc-volume-driver.xml
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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0"> xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
<title>EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver</title> <title>EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver</title>
<para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver, which is based on the iSCSI <para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver, which is based on the iSCSI
driver, can create, delete, attach, and detach volumes, create driver, can create, delete, attach, and detach volumes. It can
and delete snapshots, and so on.</para> also create and delete snapshots, and so on.</para>
<para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver runs volume operations by <para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver runs volume operations by
communicating with the back-end EMC storage. It uses a CIM communicating with the back-end EMC storage. It uses a CIM
client in Python called PyWBEM to perform CIM operations over client in Python called PyWBEM to perform CIM operations over
@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ cinder_emc_config_file = /etc/cinder/cinder_emc_config.xml</programlisting>
Masking View must have an Initiator Group that Masking View must have an Initiator Group that
contains the initiator of the OpenStack compute node contains the initiator of the OpenStack compute node
that hosts the VM.</para> that hosts the VM.</para>
<para>StorageType is the thin pool where user wants to <para>StorageType is the thin pool where the user wants to
create the volume from. Only thin LUNs are supported create the volume from. Only thin LUNs are supported
by the plug-in. Thin pools can be created using by the plug-in. Thin pools can be created using
Unisphere for VMAX and VNX.</para> Unisphere for VMAX and VNX.</para>