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Shilla Saebi 2014-01-30 13:29:22 -05:00
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doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/emc-volume-driver.xml
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xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink" version="5.0">
<title>EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver</title>
<para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver, which is based on the iSCSI
driver, can create, delete, attach, and detach volumes, create
and delete snapshots, and so on.</para>
driver, can create, delete, attach, and detach volumes. It can
also create and delete snapshots, and so on.</para>
<para>The EMC SMI-S iSCSI driver runs volume operations by
communicating with the back-end EMC storage. It uses a CIM
client in Python called PyWBEM to perform CIM operations over
@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ cinder_emc_config_file = /etc/cinder/cinder_emc_config.xml</programlisting>
Masking View must have an Initiator Group that
contains the initiator of the OpenStack compute node
that hosts the VM.</para>
<para>StorageType is the thin pool where user wants to
<para>StorageType is the thin pool where the user wants to
create the volume from. Only thin LUNs are supported
by the plug-in. Thin pools can be created using
Unisphere for VMAX and VNX.</para>