From 5d50dbad918ec77f966b758af8c00a6cb2fbb7ec Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ben Silverman Date: Sun, 1 Feb 2015 23:20:46 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammar changes Added commas where needed and made changes to some conjunctions to improve readability and understanding. Fixed all review suggestions. Change-Id: I75823235d0526739aa4d72ee12eeb3303a29e9c0 --- doc/arch-design/ch_multi_site.xml | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/arch-design/ch_multi_site.xml b/doc/arch-design/ch_multi_site.xml index 8e0ec2e622..dc96d231f3 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/ch_multi_site.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/ch_multi_site.xml @@ -6,13 +6,13 @@ xml:id="multi_site"> Multi-site - A multi-site OpenStack environment is one in which services - located in more than one data center are used to provide the + A multi-site OpenStack environment is one in which services, + located in more than one data center, are used to provide the overall solution. Usage requirements of different multi-site - clouds may vary widely, however they share some common needs. + clouds may vary widely, but they share some common needs. OpenStack is capable of running in a multi-region - configuration allowing some parts of OpenStack to effectively - manage a grouping of sites as a single cloud. With some + configuration. This enables some parts of OpenStack to + effectively manage a group of sites as a single cloud. With careful planning in the design phase, OpenStack can act as an excellent multi-site cloud solution for a multitude of needs.