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<?dbhtml stop-chunking?>
<title>Manage project security</title>
<para>Security groups are sets of IP filter rules that are applied
to all project instances, and which define networking access
to all project instances, which define networking access
to the instance. Group rules are project specific; project
members can edit the default rules for their group and add new
rule sets.</para>
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</note>
<para>You can use the <code>allow_same_net_traffic</code> option
in the <filename>/etc/nova/nova.conf</filename> file to
globally control whether the rules applies to hosts which
globally control whether the rules apply to hosts which
share a network.</para>
<para>If set to:</para>
<itemizedlist>
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<procedure>
<title>List and view current security groups</title>
<para>From the command line you can get a list of security
groups for the project you're acting in using the nova
groups for the project, using the nova
command:</para>
<step>
<para>Ensure your system variables are set for the user
and tenant for which you are checking security group
rules. For example:</para>
rules for. For example:</para>
<programlisting language="bash">export OS_USERNAME=demo00
export OS_TENANT_NAME=tenant01</programlisting>
</step>
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+-------------+-----------+---------+-----------+--------------+ </computeroutput></screen>
<para>These rules are allow type rules as the default is
deny. The first column is the IP protocol (one of
icmp, tcp, or udp) the second and third columns
icmp, tcp, or udp). The second and third columns
specify the affected port range. The third column
specifies the IP range in CIDR format. This example
shows the full port range for all protocols allowed
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<step>
<para>Ensure your system variables are set for the user
and tenant for which you are checking security group
rules.</para>
rules for.</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>Add the new security group, as follows:</para>
<para>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>nova secgroup-create <replaceable>GroupName Description</replaceable></userinput></screen>
<screen><prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>nova secgroup-create <replaceable>Group Name Description</replaceable></userinput></screen>
</para>
<para>For example:</para>
<para>
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<step>
<para>Ensure your system variables are set for the user
and tenant for which you are deleting a security
group.</para>
group for.</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>Delete the new security group, as follows:</para>
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<procedure>
<title>Create security group rules for a cluster of
instances</title>
<para>SourceGroups are a special, dynamic way of defining the
CIDR of allowed sources. The user specifies a SourceGroup
<para>Source Groups are a special, dynamic way of defining the
CIDR of allowed sources. The user specifies a Source Group
(Security Group name), and all the users' other Instances
using the specified SourceGroup are selected dynamically.
using the specified Source Group are selected dynamically.
This alleviates the need for individual rules to allow
each new member of the cluster.</para>
<step>
<para>Make sure to set the system variables for the user
and tenant for which you are deleting a security
group.</para>
group for.</para>
</step>
<step>
<para>Add a source group, as follows:</para>