From 8e449fb9b2de3926f763e35db0691b5a2a445921 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shilla Saebi <shilla.saebi@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2014 20:21:07 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] edits to hp-lefthand-driver.xml

removed . which was extra after snapshots
added hyphen in back-end for consistency with rest of doc
added hyphen in key-values for consistency with rest of doc
removed . after for prior to listing items

Change-Id: Id64e9bc1fb15ef019dc75b660484bcaede1a7a21
---
 .../block-storage/drivers/hp-lefthand-driver.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/hp-lefthand-driver.xml b/doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/hp-lefthand-driver.xml
index 4d31500ff1..92a43aaa2d 100644
--- a/doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/hp-lefthand-driver.xml
+++ b/doc/config-reference/block-storage/drivers/hp-lefthand-driver.xml
@@ -99,13 +99,13 @@
                     <para>Copy volumes to images</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                    <para>Backend assisted volume migration</para>
+                    <para>Migrate volumes with back-end assistance</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                    <para>Volume retype</para>
+                    <para>Retype volume</para>
                 </listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
-            <para>When a volume is migrated, using Backend assisted volume
+            <para>When you use back-end assisted volume
                 migration, both source and destination clusters must be in
                 the same HP LeftHand/StoreVirtual management group.
                 The HP LeftHand/StoreVirtual array will use native LeftHand
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@
                 </listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
             <para>
-                To work with the default filter scheduler, the key values
-                are case sensitive and scoped with
+                To work with the default filter scheduler, the key-value pairs
+                are case-sensitive and scoped with
                 <literal>'hplh:'</literal>.
                 For information about how to set the key-value pairs and
                 associate them with a volume type, run the following
@@ -146,8 +146,8 @@
 <screen> <prompt>$</prompt> <userinput>cinder help type-key</userinput></screen>
             <itemizedlist>
               <listitem>
-                <para>The following keys require that the HP LeftHand/StoreVirtual
-                            storage array be configured for.</para>
+                <para>The following keys require the HP LeftHand/StoreVirtual
+                            storage array be configured for</para>
                 <variablelist>
                   <varlistentry><term>hplh:ao</term>
                     <listitem><para>The HP LeftHand/StoreVirtual storage array
@@ -340,7 +340,7 @@ hplefthand_debug=false
                     <para>Detach volumes</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
-                    <para>Create snapshots.</para>
+                    <para>Create snapshots</para>
                 </listitem>
                 <listitem>
                     <para>Delete snapshots</para>