diff --git a/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml b/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml index 45db6554b6..97e228e394 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/compute_focus/section_architecture_compute_focus.xml @@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ cloud network architecture. Once these key considerations have been decided, the proper network can be designed to best serve the workloads being placed in the cloud. - It is recommended that the network architecture is designed using + We recommend designing the network architecture using a scalable network model that makes it easy to add capacity and bandwidth. A good example of such a model is the leaf-spline model. In this type of network design, it is possible to easily add additional @@ -355,7 +355,7 @@ growth as workload demands increase. It is also important to evaluate where in the network architecture it is valuable to provide redundancy. Increased network availability and redundancy comes at a cost, therefore - it is recommended to weigh the cost versus the benefit gained from + we recommend to weigh the cost versus the benefit gained from utilizing and deploying redundant network switches and using bonded interfaces at the host level. @@ -594,7 +594,7 @@ OpenStack services is required. OpenStack services support connecting to any database that is supported by the SQLAlchemy Python drivers, however most common database deployments make use of MySQL or some - variation of it. It is recommended that the database which provides + variation of it. We recommend that the database which provides back-end service within a general purpose cloud be made highly available using an available technology which can accomplish that goal. Some of the more common software solutions used include Galera,