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This patch corrects some grammar mistakes in Networking section of
Admin-guide-cloud document to avoid misunderstanding.

Change-Id: Ieade4c6ecc82fcd3edd6cb528bbe6901c3570a00
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Lujin Luo 2015-10-08 17:15:14 +09:00
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doc/admin-guide-cloud/source/networking_adv-features.rst
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@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ configuration of plug-ins supporting the provider extension:
+----------------------+-----------------------------------------------------+
| Term | Description |
+======================+=====================================================+
| **virtual network** |An Networking L2 network (identified by a UUID and |
| **virtual network** |A Networking L2 network (identified by a UUID and |
| |optional name) whose ports can be attached as vNICs |
| |to Compute instances and to various Networking |
| |agents. The Open vSwitch and Linux Bridge plug-ins |

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doc/admin-guide-cloud/source/networking_config-identity.rst
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@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Configure Identity service for Networking
The way that you create a Networking endpoint entry depends on whether
you are using the SQL or the template catalog driver:
- If you use the *SQL driver*, run the following command with the
- If you are using the *SQL driver*, run the following command with the
specified region (``$REGION``), IP address of the Networking server
(``$IP``), and service ID (``$NEUTRON_SERVICE_ID``, obtained in the
previous step).

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doc/admin-guide-cloud/source/networking_introduction.rst
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@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ create a firewall that applies the policy.
**Allowed-address-pairs.**
``Allowed-address-pairs`` enable you to specify
``Allowed-address-pairs`` enables you to specify
mac_address/ip_address(cidr) pairs that pass through a port regardless
of subnet. This enables the use of protocols such as VRRP, which floats
an IP address between two instances to enable fast data plane failover.
@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ an IP address between two instances to enable fast data plane failover.
**Basic allowed-address-pairs operations.**
- Create a port with a specified allowed address pairs:
- Create a port with a specified allowed address pair:
.. code:: console

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doc/admin-guide-cloud/source/networking_use.rst
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@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ advanced network operations:
| | ``$ neutron subnet-create`` |
| | ``net1 10.0.0.0/24 --enable-dhcp False`` |
+-------------------------------+--------------------------------------------+
|Specified set of host routes. | |
|Specifies a set of host routes | |
| | |
| | ``$ neutron subnet-create`` |
| | ``test-net1 40.0.0.0/24 --host-routes``|
@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ complete basic VM networking operations:
| |``$ neutron port-list --device_id VM_ID``|
+----------------------------------+-----------------------------------------+
|Searches for ports, but shows | |
|onlythe ``mac_address`` of | |
|only the ``mac_address`` of | |
|the port. | |
| | |
| | ``$ neutron port-list --field`` |
@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ complete advanced VM creation operations:
Cloud images that distribution vendors offer usually have only one
active NIC configured. When you boot with multiple NICs, you must
configure additional interfaces on the image or the NICS are not
configure additional interfaces on the image or the NICs are not
reachable.
The following Debian/Ubuntu-based example shows how to set up the