From b31c3c5aadd360958b2e6dfef851b8cd7f18e6e2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Shilla Saebi <shilla.saebi@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 4 Feb 2014 02:24:57 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] cleanup of ch_section_ubuntu

changed some wording, upon to on
changed able to, to on the internet
one of another changed to one or another
changed boot the install to boot for the first time
know longer changed to no longer

Change-Id: I3eb70dd628602b92f5456b48c09ee0ad4870de48
---
 doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml b/doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml
index 87b7ffb172..22e54e9177 100644
--- a/doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml
+++ b/doc/image-guide/section_ubuntu-example.xml
@@ -82,14 +82,14 @@
             work fine.</para>
         <para>If unsure, we recommend you use the installer's default
             partition scheme, since there is no clear advantage to one
-            scheme of another.</para>
+            scheme or another.</para>
     </simplesect>
     <simplesect>
         <title>Automatic updates</title>
         <para>The Ubuntu installer will ask how you want to manage
-            upgrades on your system. This option depends upon your
+            upgrades on your system. This option depends on your
             specific use case. If your virtual machine instances will
-            be able to connect to the internet, we recommend "Install
+            be connected to the internet, we recommend "Install
             security updates automatically".</para>
     </simplesect>
     <simplesect>
@@ -159,8 +159,8 @@
 
         <para>Run the following commands in the host as root to start
             up the machine again as paused, eject the disk and resume.
-            If you are using virt-manager, you may instead use the
-            GUI.<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh start precise --paused</userinput>
+            If you are using virt-manager, you may use the GUI
+            instead.<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh start precise --paused</userinput>
 <prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh attach-disk --type cdrom --mode readonly precise "" hdc</userinput>
 <prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh resume precise</userinput></screen></para>
         <note>
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
     </simplesect>
     <simplesect>
         <title>Log in to newly created image</title>
-        <para>When you boot the first time after install, it may ask
+        <para>When you boot for the first time after install, it may ask
             you about authentication tools, you can just choose
             'Exit'. Then, log in as root using the root password you
             specified.</para>
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
     <simplesect>
         <title>Undefine the libvirt domain</title>
         <para>Now that the image is ready to be uploaded to the Image
-            service, we know longer need to have this virtual machine
+            service, we no longer need to have this virtual machine
             image managed by libvirt. Use the <command>virsh undefine
                     <replaceable>vm-image</replaceable></command>
             command to inform