From b63c36e0c0375da24cf3c5b8c8f105ee0f04c8c3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ben Silverman Date: Sat, 31 Jan 2015 09:46:24 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Corrected comma splices, run-on sentences and word choice. The first paragraph was corrected for incorrect "however" usage and other subsequent paragraphs were updated with correct grammar and word choices to improve clarity and readability. Change-Id: Ice8e1ed5b79fae4bcc82e02fd4200eaff2b063f6 --- doc/arch-design/ch_introduction.xml | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/arch-design/ch_introduction.xml b/doc/arch-design/ch_introduction.xml index 45f76a93a9..23dd2a864c 100644 --- a/doc/arch-design/ch_introduction.xml +++ b/doc/arch-design/ch_introduction.xml @@ -9,26 +9,26 @@ OpenStack is a leader in the cloud technology gold rush, as organizations of all stripes discover the increased flexibility and speed to market that self-service cloud and - Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) provides. To truly reap - those benefits, however, the cloud must be designed and + Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) provides. However, in order + to reap those benefits, the cloud must be designed and architected properly. A well-architected cloud provides a stable IT environment that offers easy access to needed resources, usage-based expenses, extra capacity on demand, disaster recovery, and a - secure environment, but a well-architected cloud does not + secure environment. A well-architected cloud does not magically build itself. It requires careful consideration of a - multitude of factors, both technical and non-technical. + multitude of factors both technical and non-technical. There is no single architecture that is "right" for an OpenStack cloud deployment. OpenStack can be used for any - number of different purposes, and each of them has its own + number of different purposes, each with its own particular requirements and architectural peculiarities. - This book is designed to look at some of the most common - uses for OpenStack clouds (and even some that are less common, - but provide a good example) and explain what issues need to be - considered and why, along with a wealth of knowledge and - advice to help an organization to design and build a - well-architected OpenStack cloud that will fit its unique + This book is designed to examine some of the most common + uses for OpenStack clouds (and some less common uses) + and to provide knowledge and advice to help explain the + issues that require consideration. These examples, coupled + with a wealth of knowledge and advice will help an organization + design and build a well-architected OpenStack cloud to fit its unique requirements.