diff --git a/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml b/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml
index 98e80a7ef9..fac292f2d4 100644
--- a/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml
+++ b/doc/arch-design/network_focus/section_architecture_network_focus.xml
@@ -7,12 +7,12 @@
Architecture
Network focused OpenStack architectures have many
similarities to other OpenStack architecture use cases. There
- a number of very specific considerations to keep in mind when
+ are a number of very specific considerations to keep in mind when
designing for a network-centric or network-heavy application
environment.
- Networks exist to serve a as medium of transporting data
+ Networks exist to serve as a medium of transporting data
between systems. It is inevitable that an OpenStack design
- have inter-dependencies with non-network portions of OpenStack
+ has inter-dependencies with non-network portions of OpenStack
as well as on external systems. Depending on the specific
workload, there may be major interactions with storage systems
both within and external to the OpenStack environment. For
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
protocols. While OpenStack was initially built with only IPv4
support, Networking now supports IPv6 and dual-stacked networks.
Note that, as of the Icehouse release, this only includes
- stateless address autoconfiguration but work is in
+ stateless address auto configuration but work is in
progress to support stateless and stateful DHCPv6 as well as
IPv6 floating IPs without NAT. Some workloads become possible
through the use of IPv6 and IPv6 to IPv4 reverse transition