diff --git a/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml b/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml
index e8b714da7f..75fa3385c0 100644
--- a/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml
+++ b/doc/training-guides/lab001-control-node.xml
@@ -96,10 +96,10 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp
SSH from HOST
- Create a SSH key pair for your Control Node. Follow the same steps as you did in the starting section of the article for your host machine.
+ Create an SSH key pair for your Control Node. Follow the same steps as you did in the starting section of the article for your host machine.
- To SSH into Control Node from the Host Machine type the below command.
+ To SSH into the Control Node from the Host Machine type the below command.
$ ssh control@10.10.10.51
$ sudo su
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp
Keystone
- Keystone is an OpenStack project that provides Identity, Token, Catalog and Policy services for use specifically by projects in the OpenStack family.It implements OpenStack’s Identity API.
+ Keystone is an OpenStack project that provides Identity, Token, Catalog and Policy services for use specifically by projects in the OpenStack family. It implements OpenStack’s Identity API.
Install Keystone packages:
@@ -255,16 +255,16 @@ iface eth2 inet dhcp
Glance
- OpenStack Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and retrieving virtual machine images.
+ The OpenStack Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and retrieving virtual machine images.
Glance has a RESTful API that allows querying of VM image metadata as well as retrieval of the actual image.
VM images made available through Glance can be stored in a variety of locations from simple file systems to object-storage systems like the OpenStack Swift project.
Glance, as with all OpenStack projects, is written with the following design guidelines in mind:
- Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors
+ Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behaviors
- Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads
+ Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads
Fault tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ flavor = keystone
Neutron is an OpenStack project to provide “network connectivity as a service" between interface devices (e.g., vNICs) managed by other OpenStack services (e.g., nova).
- Install Neutron Server and the OpenVSwitch package collection:
+ Install the Neutron Server and the Open vSwitch package collection:
# apt-get install -y neutron-server
@@ -441,10 +441,10 @@ connection = mysql://neutronUser:neutronPass@10.10.10.51/neutronNova is written with the following design guidelines in mind
- Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors
+ Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behaviors
- Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads
+ Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads
Fault-Tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures
@@ -566,10 +566,10 @@ osapi_volume_listen_port=5900
Cinder is an OpenStack project to provide “block storage as a service”.
- Component based architecture: Quickly add new behaviors
+ Component based architecture: Quickly adds new behavior
- Highly available: Scale to very serious workloads
+ Highly available: Scales to very serious workloads
Fault-Tolerant: Isolated processes avoid cascading failures
@@ -578,7 +578,7 @@ osapi_volume_listen_port=5900
Recoverable: Failures should be easy to diagnose, debug, and rectify
- Open Standards: Be a reference implementation for a community-driven api
+ Open Standards: Be a reference implementation for a community-driven API
@@ -646,7 +646,7 @@ rabbit_port = 5672
- Finally, create a volumegroup and name it cinder-volumes:
+ Finally, create a volume group and name it cinder-volumes:
# dd if=/dev/zero of=cinder-volumes bs=1 count=0 seek=2G
# losetup /dev/loop2 cinder-volumes
@@ -667,7 +667,7 @@ rabbit_port = 5672
- Note: Beware that this volume group gets lost after a system reboot. If you dont want to do this step again ... make sure that you save the machine state and not shut it down.
+ Note: Be aware that this volume group gets lost after a system reboot. If you do not want to perform this step again, make sure that you save the machine state and do not shut it down.
Restart the Cinder services:
@@ -686,13 +686,13 @@ rabbit_port = 5672
Horizon is the canonical implementation of OpenStack’s dashboard, which provides a web based user interface to OpenStack services including Nova, Swift, Keystone, etc.
- To install Horizon, proceed like this
+To install Horizon, proceed with the following steps:
# apt-get install -y openstack-dashboard memcached
- If you don't like the OpenStack Ubuntu Theme, you can remove it with help of the below command:
+ If you do not like the OpenStack Ubuntu Theme, you can remove it with help of the below command:
# dpkg --purge openstack-dashboard-ubuntu-theme