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Removal of passive voice from ArchDesign Guide

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Removed passive voice from Compute Focus Section. Made additional edit on
line 348 to remove passive voice that I missed in initial patch.

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cloud network architecture. Once these key considerations have been cloud network architecture. Once these key considerations have been
decided, the proper network can be designed to best serve the workloads decided, the proper network can be designed to best serve the workloads
being placed in the cloud.</para> being placed in the cloud.</para>
<para>It is recommended that the network architecture is designed using <para>We recommend designing the network architecture using
a scalable network model that makes it easy to add capacity and a scalable network model that makes it easy to add capacity and
bandwidth. A good example of such a model is the leaf-spline model. In bandwidth. A good example of such a model is the leaf-spline model. In
this type of network design, it is possible to easily add additional this type of network design, it is possible to easily add additional
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growth as workload demands increase. It is also important to evaluate growth as workload demands increase. It is also important to evaluate
where in the network architecture it is valuable to provide redundancy. where in the network architecture it is valuable to provide redundancy.
Increased network availability and redundancy comes at a cost, therefore Increased network availability and redundancy comes at a cost, therefore
it is recommended to weigh the cost versus the benefit gained from we recommend to weigh the cost versus the benefit gained from
utilizing and deploying redundant network switches and using bonded utilizing and deploying redundant network switches and using bonded
interfaces at the host level.</para> interfaces at the host level.</para>
</section> </section>
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OpenStack services is required. OpenStack services support connecting OpenStack services is required. OpenStack services support connecting
to any database that is supported by the SQLAlchemy Python drivers, to any database that is supported by the SQLAlchemy Python drivers,
however most common database deployments make use of MySQL or some however most common database deployments make use of MySQL or some
variation of it. It is recommended that the database which provides variation of it. We recommend that the database which provides
back-end service within a general purpose cloud be made highly back-end service within a general purpose cloud be made highly
available using an available technology which can accomplish that available using an available technology which can accomplish that
goal. Some of the more common software solutions used include Galera, goal. Some of the more common software solutions used include Galera,