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work fine.</para>
<para>If unsure, we recommend you use the installer's default
partition scheme, since there is no clear advantage to one
scheme of another.</para>
scheme or another.</para>
</simplesect>
<simplesect>
<title>Automatic updates</title>
<para>The Ubuntu installer will ask how you want to manage
upgrades on your system. This option depends upon your
upgrades on your system. This option depends on your
specific use case. If your virtual machine instances will
be able to connect to the internet, we recommend "Install
be connected to the internet, we recommend "Install
security updates automatically".</para>
</simplesect>
<simplesect>
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<para>Run the following commands in the host as root to start
up the machine again as paused, eject the disk and resume.
If you are using virt-manager, you may instead use the
GUI.<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh start precise --paused</userinput>
If you are using virt-manager, you may use the GUI
instead.<screen><prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh start precise --paused</userinput>
<prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh attach-disk --type cdrom --mode readonly precise "" hdc</userinput>
<prompt>#</prompt> <userinput>virsh resume precise</userinput></screen></para>
<note>
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</simplesect>
<simplesect>
<title>Log in to newly created image</title>
<para>When you boot the first time after install, it may ask
<para>When you boot for the first time after install, it may ask
you about authentication tools, you can just choose
'Exit'. Then, log in as root using the root password you
specified.</para>
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<simplesect>
<title>Undefine the libvirt domain</title>
<para>Now that the image is ready to be uploaded to the Image
service, we know longer need to have this virtual machine
service, we no longer need to have this virtual machine
image managed by libvirt. Use the <command>virsh undefine
<replaceable>vm-image</replaceable></command>
command to inform