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<para>OpenStack is a leader in the cloud technology gold rush, as <para>OpenStack is a leader in the cloud technology gold rush, as
organizations of all stripes discover the increased organizations of all stripes discover the increased
flexibility and speed to market that self-service cloud and flexibility and speed to market that self-service cloud and
Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) provides. To truly reap Infrastructure-as-a-Service (IaaS) provides. However, in order
those benefits, however, the cloud must be designed and to reap those benefits, the cloud must be designed and
architected properly.</para> architected properly.</para>
<para>A well-architected cloud provides a stable IT environment <para>A well-architected cloud provides a stable IT environment
that offers easy access to needed resources, usage-based that offers easy access to needed resources, usage-based
expenses, extra capacity on demand, disaster recovery, and a expenses, extra capacity on demand, disaster recovery, and a
secure environment, but a well-architected cloud does not secure environment. A well-architected cloud does not
magically build itself. It requires careful consideration of a magically build itself. It requires careful consideration of a
multitude of factors, both technical and non-technical.</para> multitude of factors both technical and non-technical.</para>
<para>There is no single architecture that is "right" for an <para>There is no single architecture that is "right" for an
OpenStack cloud deployment. OpenStack can be used for any OpenStack cloud deployment. OpenStack can be used for any
number of different purposes, and each of them has its own number of different purposes, each with its own
particular requirements and architectural particular requirements and architectural
peculiarities.</para> peculiarities.</para>
<para>This book is designed to look at some of the most common <para>This book is designed to examine some of the most common
uses for OpenStack clouds (and even some that are less common, uses for OpenStack clouds (and some less common uses)
but provide a good example) and explain what issues need to be and to provide knowledge and advice to help explain the
considered and why, along with a wealth of knowledge and issues that require consideration. These examples, coupled
advice to help an organization to design and build a with a wealth of knowledge and advice will help an organization
well-architected OpenStack cloud that will fit its unique design and build a well-architected OpenStack cloud to fit its unique
requirements.</para> requirements.</para>
<xi:include href="introduction/section_intended_audience.xml"/> <xi:include href="introduction/section_intended_audience.xml"/>